My first time

Hello anyone reading this, which is probably very few people. 

I am your average 20-something doing what every 20-something does: question why I exist.

I am trying to find that out, and with the release of The Moonlight Glistening, I am attempting to start to slowly, very slowly (because I'm a bit dumb) get into the world of game/narrative design. 

The Moonlight Glistening is a fairly old piece of writing that I adapted into a quick little bite-sized story. Judge is harshly, for I need the feedback if I plan to keep doing this. 

Thanks for reading.